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Hime fights evil
*Hime went to heaven and spoke with god* God: Hime the demon army is coming I'm trusting you to beat them "Ok I will. I will show them true horror and pain" *Hime went down into the field to face the demon army* Demons: It's Hime we have to stop her "I won't let you get away with this demon army" *Hime started slaughtering the demon army by hundreds using light magic and her sword*
"And then she used her heavenly powers to-" A purple cat, sitting in the middle of the battlefield, frowns and bites her pencil. No, the words on paper weren't that good. "No, this summary isn't perfect. Hm. Anyway..." She takes out another sheet of paper. "Hey, angel girl, I have some constructive criticism for you. The pacing's pretty rushed, you know? Even in my story, there was at least some buildup. You've got to let the readers get a feel for everything, ya know?" She casually ducks under a demon's swipe.
Angels, feel my wrath! Hilda slaughters several generic angels who are invading to protect them from the royal capital I... won't let you! I won't let you harm this planet! Hilda sets off explosive magic which destroys millions of angels
"Oi, witch! You're creating a few continuity and lore errors here! It's hard enough to work with one story when the Nexus jumbles them all up!" Gleamstar shouts at Hilda, punching out a demon without even looking.
(edited by Gleamstar)
"...Oh, whoops" Hilda says as she punches an angel in the face "Sorry."
This is a mess.
It’s pronounced daemon not demon.