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Camziez
Horrible Attempt at a Comic(not done yet)
https://i.imgur.com/tTRCEoZ.png Seriously, it's in its first rough sketch. Anything I should change? Any ideas? Should I change Akechi's expression?
Skechi-Akechi
I think Akechi's Lenny face should be a constant. It suits his true motives. Other than that it looks pretty good.
Camziez
Thanks!
Camziez
https://i.imgur.com/T3acHhq.png Here is my second rough sketch, what should akech say?
Garden_of_Rosie
I think the Lenny eyes on Akechi should be a bit taller. Or perhaps adjust his hairline so he doesn't end up with Haru's fivehead
Camziez
alright, will fix that actually sai is not working now of all times rip
(edited by Camziez)
Soupicide
honestly, it's pretty good as is. then again, i'm an uneducated art pleb, so my praise isn't worth much. i still think it's funny though!
Camziez
Wait it's funny???? I'm funny???? Welp thanks!
Soupicide
For what Akechi's saying, maybe something about having rather having shared a picture of pancakes? idk i'm not funny
Camziez
WTF SAI Y ERASER NO WORK
Camziez
For what Akechi's saying, maybe something about having rather having shared a picture of pancakes? idk i'm not funny Tha's a pretty good idea except people might not find it funny because they think pancake jokes are overused :/
Soupicide
PANCAKE JOKES WILL NEVER DIE https://78.media.tumblr.com/dc26484213aeae46ef3a8199974ae1f6/tumblr_oqwnfnBBeA1vb0tywo1_1280.png
RenMamamiya
MUAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHA
Camziez
Aight here it is now https://i.imgur.com/yz5qNb6.png Unleash thy pancakes.
Camziez
This comic can also be named"The Day Ryuji Died"
Soupicide
Nice! Just add lines for Haru and Mona, and you're done, along with colouring, if you're doing that. BTW, where's Ren in this?
Garden_of_Rosie
Probs still in police custody seeing as how this is following the casino raid
Soupicide
oh right lol im dumb
Camziez
Bmp just in case
Camziez
Almost done the final rough sketch!
Soupicide
oh nice! i thought you were done with this without letting us see the finished product.
PhantomGana112
Where's Futaba?
-Light-
Gone.
PhantomGana112
gasp
Camziez
I added a Futaba, and I'm on line art!
PhantomGana112
Okay
BestVillain64
It's not horrible at all. Better than anything I can do.
Camziez
Thank you. If I have bo homework, I should finish today! ^^ I can even make the cover for my "Persona 5: Phansite Skits" book ^^ but I need to figure out how to make to make the text similiar to that of Persona 5, like "forum" at the top of the screen.
Camziez
No*
RenMamamiya
https://i.imgur.com/ra946qR.png L E N N Y A K E C H And I just realized putting him behind Makoto is perfect. SPREAD THIS MEME
Camziez
EFF WRONG ACCOUNT