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A Portrait of Futaba

Yesterday, while at Leblanc, a rush of inspiration for my next piece rushed though me like a subway train whenever I would look at Futaba, so I immediately started working on this piece. I drew her, looking to her left, smiling freely, under the darkness of the rain. However, she manages to be as carefree as ever! Her dark past, her mother's death, her social anxiety, all cause the immense pain she feels on the inside of her heart, but she still perseveres! Her large eyes, and her grin, how could she be so joyful? Those are answers I am still looking for, but with that being said, please send your input. https://img00.deviantart.net/1e40/i/2018/146/f/1/best_girl_futaba_by_camzdoesart-dccl1tc.jpg OOC: I actually drew this and it turned out good in my opinion, though it annoys me that her head is weirdly shaped. Also mods please delete https://phansite.net/forum/topic.php?topic=14693

-Light-

I doubt they will.

Camziez

I love how no one is commenting on the art. You know what, that's okay.

Gin

I mean, It's not bad. Just need to work on the lower half of the face is all

Pancake_Knight

I find that the hair is quite well done, the glasses and eyes are also fine, the only issue is that Futaba's face is not stretched like mine. Other then that it's fine!

-KitagawaYusuke-

I greatly appreciate your input, Crow. I will definetly- stretched?!

Akechi_Kun

Lemme give some advice. Let's start with the good things: Â·The coloring is fine, just a bit messy but if you were aiming for that style in mind it's ok. Â·The propotions are almost alright, they surely would be if it wasn't for the face. Well then let's move to the rest Â°One of her eyes/glasses piece is a bit smaller, you can avoid this by making lines a bit up on the center of where the eye should be and a bit down. Â°Well the face of course there are many ways to correct that. You could try making an oval, have a triangle start from the center of it and build the face from there. I can give you an example if what i mean with it later, i just woke up and it's gonna be a while before i get up.

Fantaba_Sakura

Um. . . Thanks Inari? You didn't have to.

(edited by Fantaba_Sakura)

-KitagawaYusuke-

@Akechi_Kun OOC: Wow, thanks for the legitimate constructive criticism! I actually drew this in the middle of the night because I was bored, and by the end I felt like Picasso, but when I woke up the next morning I hated it, yea the artist struggle is real. I usual don't color my drawings, so the fact you think it is good makes me feel like I'm improving! If you want to continue helping, contact @Camziez through PMs. IC: I appreciate your advice, and I will take it into account next time.

-KitagawaYusuke-

Um. . . Thanks Inari? You didn't have to.When an artist gets inspiration, then he will be determined to follow through with it. I am glad that you appreciate it.