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My Ninth Phanfic
"Criminal Records: The Man Who Stole My Heart"

by IamThou

It was a regular school afternoon at Shujin Academy. Student council president Makoto Niijima, as always, is following second year student Akira Kurusu around the school because of her suspicions that he may be a Phantom Thief, and for her...personal reasons.

At the school courtyard, Makoto was spying on Akira as he approached a vending machine.

"He's...inserting a coin into the vending machine...inputting some special code into it...he must have modified this machine to be a door leading to his hideout..." Makoto murmured.

*Sound of a can dropping*

"Oh wait, he just bought a soda. Drat! I thought I had him this time! He...looks really good when he's trying to quench his thirst though..." Niijima mumbled to herself as she was staring at Akira drinking a can of Dr Salt NEO.
Suddenly, a girl approaches Makoto from behind and said:

"Hey there, miss prez! Who're you looking at there?"

"WOAH!~"

Makoto was surprised. One of the student council members caught her off guard.

"Oh, it's just you..." She said in relief.

"So...do you have a crush on the transfer student or something? You've been following him around since last week."
The student asked Makoto.

"Oh, o-of course n-not! Principal Kobayakawa just requested me to keep an eye out for suspicious activity around the school." Makoto answered.

"Hmm, are you sure? Your face is turning red..."

Makoto then sighs and explained:

"I guess it's useless to hide it now. Yes, you're correct, I...do like him...just a bit. Please don't tell anyone about this. My sister would kill me if she found out I've had a crush on a student with a criminal record."

"Don't worry, Niijima-san, your secret is safe with me. Anyways, do we have a meeting later?"

"No, you can go home for today."

"Alright. Well, good luck with your 'investigation'!"

"Th-thank you..."

As the girl left, Makoto continued following the boy while covering her face with a magazine.
A few hours later at the Niijima residence, Makoto is seen doing her daily routine of writing entries in her journal.

"Entry # 23: The transfer student continues to act suspicious, meeting up with that vulgar boy Ryuji Sakamoto and victim of Kamoshida's abuses: Ann Takamaki every after class. They seem to be talking to a black cat. I don't know how they can communicate, but it seems like they're planning something."

She pastes a picture of Akira on the journal.

"...He looks really good in that summer uniform..."

Makoto then hears a voice from downstairs.

"Makoto, are you up there? It's time for dinner!" Her sister Sae yelled.

"I-I'm coming, Sis!"

The girl then closed the journal and rushed downstairs.
nice ;)
.....creepy, old man..girl
The following day, at Shujin Academy,

Makoto is stalking Akira through the hallway, when suddenly:

Akira: "Hmm?" *Turns around*

As he turned around, Makoto quickly looked away from him. Feeling suspicious, Akira then approached the girl.

"Are you following me, Niijima-senpai?" The boy asked.

"N-no! I'm just going around school asking students if they're having any problem. Us being in the same area is purely coincidental." Makoto told him.

"What's with the magazine then?" He questioned Makoto.

"O-oh. I just saw an i-interesting article here. Don't worry about that." She said.

"But...that article says 'How to Get a Guy to Notice You'." Akira saw on the magazine page.

"O-oh...(Dammit, did I bring the wrong magazine?!)" She thought to herself.

"Are you seeing someone right now, Niijima-senpai? I could help you with some advice." Akira asked.

"N-n-no! That w-wont be necessesary!"
She responded while her cheeks were flushed.

"Umm...okay? Oh! I have to go now. See you, Niijima-senpai. Good luck with that guy!" Akira said.

"O-okay. B-b-bye!" She said while trying to keep calm.

As the boy left, Makoto then grabbed her chest as she leaned on the wall.

"Oh no...that was humiliating...what am I gonna do..."

She then slowly fell to the ground.

"Ughh....this is making my heart race..."

She said as she covered her face with the magazine. Makoto felt very embarassed after that situation and had a harder time talking to Akira.
@-Mishima-
OOC: Yeah I'm writing this OOC. So that's justified.



'Cept the "old" part.
makoto_stutter.wav
OOC: Shitto.

edit on part 3: "Having any problems***"

Should've proofread. FML.
I always enjoy these💖💖💖
i know but you remind me of the pedo guys you see in school awareness videos n shit
OOC: And I failed to put the music I planned for this story at the beginning.

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@-Mishima-

OOC: Your thoughts creep me out, Mishima.
well, my friends don't call me a fucking creep for nothing
OOC: By the way this isn't over yet. Gonna continue this later.
Back at the Niijima residence,

"Hey, sis? Can I ask you something?"

"What is it Makoto?"

"How do you...get a guy to like you?" She nervously asked.

"What? Shouldn't you be focusing on your studies instead of thinking about pointless matters such as these? Also, why are you asking me? I haven't been married yet."
Sae answered in a bit of an angry mood.

"I'm sorry I'm just...curious." Makoto felt bad for asking.

*Sigh* "No, it's okay Makoto. I apologize for being worked up as well. That damn Akechi keeps asking me to treat him with pancakes. So, are you into someone at school?"

"Umm...well..."

"Just describe him for me." Sae requested.

Makoto then gave a brief description of Akira's personality.

"Mysterious, hmm? I suppose that's alright, as long as he isn't a delinquent. Anyways, why not just talk to him directly?"

"I tried doing that but...I end up not making an impression on him. It's like I can't express myself when he's the one I'm talking to." Makoto responded.

"Having a hard time talking to him, huh? How about you force the info out of him then?" Sae suggested.

"You mean like, interrogate him?" Makoto asked with a shocked expression.

"Yes."

"That sounds so crazy it just might work. Alright, thanks sis!"

"No problem Makoto. Just show him you're being serious about this. Also, make sure this won't distract you from your studies."

"It won't. I promise."
This is actually the first fic of yours I've read, but I got instantly invested when it was best girl who involved. \(owo)/

Keep it up.
This is interesting. Makoto best waifu
@Ari3s
OOC: Thanks Ari3s! ❤️
No prob! Really well written thus far. I'm totally hooked.
OOC: Woo, sorry for this guys but...

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<--TO BE CONTINUED--/\|/

Brain can't handle a long, serious phanfic for one day. Might write the rest of these next time.

Think I have at least 2-3 more pages of this in mind.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa. Alright.
I can wait!
The next day, inside the student council room,

"You were looking for me, Niijima-senpai?"

"Just call me Makoto. Please take a seat."

"Alright."

Akira grabbed the chair and sat down.

"So...what's this about, Makoto?"

"I'm going to ask you some questions, I want to hear the truth and only the truth."

"Alright."

"..."

"..."

"..."

"...Umm, Makoto?"

What's going on inside Makoto's head:

(Oh my god he looks so cute, how am I going to pull this off? I mean look at him, staring at me with those glasses. He's too adorable for an interrogation!)

(I want to kiss those lips of yours, Kurusu-kun-)

"Makoto? You there?"

"Oh! I'm sorry...I was just thinking about something. Anyways, the first question:
What do you like in a girl?"

"What kind of question is that?" Akira said in surprise.

"Don't answer a question with another question. I asked that and I want to hear what you have to say."

"Hmm, what I look for in a girl? Maybe someone who can defend herself, and is very responsible."

(He's talking about me!)

"Mhm. Alright. What about looks? Anything about the looks in particular?"

"Well, I like a girl who takes care of her body. I'm not into those really thick girls you see on the internet. Oh and I prefer girls who keep clean. Don't want any germs rubbing off on me."

(Thank goodness I stay in shape. And I use hygienic products!)
"Okay. Next question: Are you going out with Ann Takamaki?"

"These questions are a bit too personal, Makoto-senpai. It feels like this isn't part of what you're doing in the student council..."

"Please answer the question."

"...Fine. Of course we're not dating. We just met each other. I did talk to her once inside Big Bang Burger, but all I did was ask her about her situation with Kamoshida. Nothing too romantic about that."

"So...you're still single?" Makoto said in a quiet voice.

"What was that?"

*Sigh*

Makoto then slammed her hands on the table and asked the final question:

"Do you like me, Akira?"

"Woah! Uhh...Makoto, is that what this is about?"

"Please...I just want to know..."

Akira then smiled, stood up, and approached Makoto. With his overflowing guts and charisma, he suddenly gave Makoto a kiss.

"Does that answer your question?"

"Uh."

Makoto couldn't answer properly from having her emotions suddenly come rushing in.

"Makoto?"

Makoto then fainted.

"Makoto?! Makoto, are you alright?!"

Akira then carried Makoto and brought her to the nurse's office.
If this isn't the cutest phanfic with Makoto, your writing never ceases to amaze IamThou
Akira let me down
I need more. OWO
After a few hours in the nurse's office, the two then went to the courtyard.

"I'm glad you're alright, Makoto. You had me worried there. Sorry for the sudden kiss."

"No, it's alright. It was really nice, actually. I'm sorry for being too intrusive of your privacy. I just...really liked you."

"It wasn't hard to tell that you liked me, Makoto-senpai."

"Wow, r-really? Was it that obvious?"

"You were following me around with just a magazine or comic book covering your face. You said you were just doing student council stuff, but I can see you're just stalking me."

"O-oh...sorry for being creepy then."

"No, it was really cute. I liked it."

"R-really?"

"Yeah. You look so adorable when you're trying to spy on someone."

"Haha...thanks. *blushes* So...does that mean I'm your lover now? If...that's alright with you..."

"It's alright with me."

"Thank you so much. *smiles at Akira*"

Akira then gave Makoto a hug.

"Th-the others might see us, you know..."

"Let them."

Makoto then wrapped her arms around Akira as well. The two then went out for a date after class.
Akira's a perv
At the Niijima residence:

"So, how did it go, Makoto?"

"It went well sis."

"Great. I knew the interrogation method would work. I won't pry into your love life, since that's your personal business, though. I hope you two become really happy with each other."

"Thanks, sis."

"You're welcome. Well, I'm off to bed. Good night, Makoto."

"Good night, sis."

Later that night in Makoto's room:

"Entry # 30: I am now Akira's girlfriend. I never thought it would happen, but it seems he had liked me all this time as well. I'm not sure if I should continue to investigate the whole Phantom Thieves thing with him though. Maybe I'll ask him about that one day. For now, I just want to be happy with him."

Makoto pastes a picture of her and Akira in the park together.

"I love you, Akira..."

~THE END~
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8/10 its cute! aside from a few typos it good
Akira x Makoto never works out in the end
@Ryujislover

OOC: Thanks, dude! That's a pretty high score for me!
I really liked it
It should've been Akira x Haru
@MinatoArisato14
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Haru. Is. Mine.
Truly wonderful ♥
@The Fool
OOC: ❤️Thank You!❤️
I will take her heart
This was great !!!
@pure_guy

OOC: Thanks. Gonna take a break on phanfics for a while since this was the hardest one I've done.

Next one might be Troublemakers III. Or a Haru and Lavenza story.
Gayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy and pretty sure Haru is straight
@MinatoArisato14
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But...Haru loves me...
@MinatoArisato14
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You're so rude!

*Cries*
I know just the right buttons to push
@MinatoArisato14
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@MinatoArisato14
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HELP! This young man is trying to molest me!

HELP!
Triggered
Huh wait what?
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Help me! Someone!

He touched my lolibox!

Help!
What's a lollibox
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*Gasp*

HELP HE TOUCHED IT AGAIN!!!
There's no one here
Just a few silent stalkers enjoying the show.
STALKERS?