a few days after Tanya's appearance

High above the skies, a little girl... oh who am I kidding, it's Tanya... anyways, Tanya was just high above the skies, holding her Mondragón Rifle and was aiming it at a target, a test dummy that she made, her eyes turn gold and what seems like a targeting system appears in front of her. She began to say some words about someone before firing a bullet at the dummy Soon a very large explosion is heard and seen as the dummy was destroyed by the explosion. Tanya would smile as held her Mondragón Rifle and she soon flies down to the ground Tanya would land on the ground and walked over to where the dummy was... in it's place was just a huge hole "mission complete... well that's good for today's training"

Futaba_45

Please keep this in one chat. It’s annoying to see the same thing over and over again.

Tanya_Degurechaff

(... i don't really know how to respond to that since well the last rp chat just kinda died... bump it once, nothing happened... then i waited a few days, nothing happened, so i just choice to make a new rp chat. besides it's my choice if i want to do this or not... and the whole reason why i'm saying this is to get my point across and to also bump this)

Fayth

OOC: At least capitalise the letters of you RP if you want people to give a damn. Geez Corbin. That's some basic 101 BS right there.

Tanya_Degurechaff

(Oh look here, some people trying to give me advice that I already try to use but somehow keep messing up since I don't know what to capitalise and when I do, i always seem to mess it up by missing other words I need to capitalise and besides I want to try and make a good rp as fast as a I can and as good as I can since I don't want to forget about it and on other news, the other reason why people can't seem to give a damn about my rps since I can't type large sentences, I just can't)

Fayth

OOC: If you don't know what to capitalise, capitalise everything. Or at the very least the first letter. Just a thought

Tanya_Degurechaff

(you know, when you saying that. you don't didn't say what I forgot to capitalise. Unless your talking about the title of this rp chat then, well you do have a good point about that... it was a last minute change but i'm not going to capitalise it all since well you don't just want a type that just YELLS AT YOU)

Fayth

OOC: Have you not read the title? With the exception of Tanya nothing is capitalised. Capitalise the first letter at the beginning of the first word of every sentence at the very least. That's basic English 101.

(edited by Fayth)

Tanya_Degurechaff

(Like I said it was a last minute change... i had a different title but thought it wasn't good and changed it but forgot to capitalise it)

Futaba_45

Still if you’re rp dies after you try to revive it there is nothing you can do. It’s dead. I had a hard time expecting this at first to but I just don’t care anymore... maybe it’s just the way I am but I stop caring after about 2 revive attempts. That’s per thread two.

Akechi_Kun

To be fair people are allowed to make new RP threads after a while if the first one has died. Bumping threads up is more annoying that making a new one completely. Thanks to you trying to be cyber police for no apparent reason this one couldn't even start. (PS: Even tho i agree that the title should've been capitalized, making it such a big deal is kinda eeeh, i've seen Corbin's earlier writing and it was much worse than this).

Yu-Narukami

Akechi, stop looking into my thoughts.

Tanya_Degurechaff

(yeah, next time when I make an rp. I'l make sure I don't forget about capitalize the title... and hopeful make the rp starter longer.... but besides that, can we please just do the rp and not just do the OOC. Please and thank you)