I lied I had time now. This was a pretty enjoyable little piece to me actually, seeing Yusuke do something other than art but still being well Yusuke is always a nice thing. Joker's utter lack of speech isn't preferred by me but I think you did it pretty well here.

I don't especially like Mona but we'll that's just because I don't like him much, you definitely got the characters pretty IC though to me. On the whole it was a fun little read and I'd check out something else by you.

Thanks for checking it out Tatsu. I was very worried I got Yusuke wrong when I was writing it since I haven't touched the game since my first play through really. Back when I was writing it I thought I might do one for all of the party members but I haven't had any ideas for them.

Next thing I write to post here will probably be action oriented. Might do a Yu VS Tatsuya fight or something. Thanks again for leaving a comment on it.

I think you did a great job capturing the characters. As Tatsuya said, Yusuke doing non art things but still being Yusuke was very enjoyable to read and imagine. And you didnt have to take away from the character to do it. The speech patterns and behavior were spot on. I love the writing style as well. Very descriptive and capable of painting a picture in my mind, but not so descriptive it takes away from the story and characters. A very well structured and envisioned piece Delta-Senpai.

All this praise is going to make me blush I swear. I'm glad this is being better received than I expected. If I do more Persona related shorts I'll post them. Thanks for taking the time to read it Labrys.

This could have been a scene straight out of the game. Good job. 11/10

Thanks Hibi. My biggest worry was not emulation the way the game handles this type of stuff.