How the user above you can improve

TogoSystem

AKA, the constructive critism thread. No one's perfect, so help out by offering tips on how you think the poster above you could improve themselves either here or in general. Don't flame.

Ghost_Akihiko

You could benefit from more protein and training!

Scarce

For you TS, I would say your writing style needs a slight change. It can seem at times that you are coming off as high and mighty or being rude, which i would like to believe you aren't.

Ghost_Akihiko

Training and protein are important too! How else are you gonna stay fit?

Akechi_Kun

Needs more protein, protein/10

Bgammax

Scarce was the last person I expected to give actual advice. Iâ€™m so confused right now.

Ruka_Maaka

Nothing to improve, you are already as good as you are.

pancakeboi

stop asking akech for art he doesn't need to do it, you're not paying him

Boss

quit being softcore

Hulk_Hogan

STOP BEING SUCH A PIMP BROTHERRR I'm kidding please go beyond your limits

Ruka_Maaka

stop asking akech for art he doesn't need to do it, you're not paying him I actually stopped a while ago.

Boss

understand timing

Ruka_Maaka

understand timing Make better coffee

Boss

understand timing Make better coffee wew

Soupicide

stop quoting the things directly above you

Ruka_Maaka

Be a cute cat for once

Hillock

Become a neko In fact, everybody should become a neko. Things would improve everywhere if that happened! William Hillock, spreading Mako-ism since 2017

Android_Guy

Become immortal.

Boss

dont rp in pms

TogoSystem

That was good advice actually, Scarce. It's not my intent, so I'll work on it. For Boss, at times he really comes across like he wants to talk, then others he stops replying. Makes him give off a lot of mixed signals if you try to talk with him sometimes.

Boss

For Boss, at times he really comes across like he wants to talk, then others he stops replying. Makes him give off a lot of mixed signals if you try to talk with him sometimes. maybe dont talk about someone as if its with someone in a private conversation in an open forum when its meant to be directed to the person in question

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TogoSystem

Huh. I didn't think that was anything too private or even embarrassing to mention. Sorry if that bothered you, but don't take it the wrong way.

Boss

i think youre missing the point.....

TogoSystem

I knew you'd see it; that's the point of this topic. Perhaps we're on different thought wavelengths.

Boss

i......no i think its just how you worded it seemed passive aggressive

TogoSystem

Ah. Sorry. No. Really didn't intend it that way at all. Suppose Scarce was right, that I really need to work on it. Hmm.

(edited by TogoSystem)

Boss

yeah, that uh.....yeah

Soupicide

Be a cute cat for once nya nya, bitch

Carl_Icahn

Adorable. Perhaps work the nya nya part out. Then it'd be really cute.